Search This Blog

Friday, March 24, 2017

Sample Academic Writing Task 1 - The Table shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished.

The Table shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words
 
Ielts Sample Academic Writing Task 1 - Pie charts 
The given table and pie charts inform, and compare changes in number of visitors and opinions of visitors about Ashdown Museum before and after renovation.

The number of people paying visit to the museum rose substantially, from 74000 to 92000 within a matter of a year of renovation. It can be observed that there was a great change in the views people held about Ashdown.

A majority of people seemed to be dissatisfied, or dissatisfied with the museum, 55%.

The swings in opinions registered a significant transformation within 12 months of renovation. An overwhelming number of people visiting Ashdown seemed content, or very happy, percentage of content and extremely happy visitors rose by 10% in both cases, rising to 40% and 30% respectively.

Quite contrary to that, there was a staggering fall in the proportion of discontented people by a good 30%, from 40% to 15% and  highly discontented by half, from 10% to 5%.


There was no change in the ratio of visiting individuals choosing not to respond.