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Tuesday, June 26, 2018

Ielts Academic Writing Task 1 Below is graph showing the incidence


Below is graph showing the incidence of mental illness ( as indicated by receipt of incapacity Benefit) amongst older UK males, from 1971-2015. The reform in the benefits system took place in 1995. 
Below is graph showing the incidence of mental illness
Ielts Academic Writing Task 1

The given graph elucidates and compares the changes in mental illness, from 1970 to 1995 and after the incapacity benefit reforms introduced in 1995 till 2015.
Overall, observed that reforms brought about a  big decline in incapacity grants after the reforms were affected.
Prior to the reforms, there was a significant rise in incapacity benefit payouts between 1970 and 1995 in all age groups even though the problems seemed to be prominent in the 60-64 age group, rising from approximately 12% to nearly 28% in 1995. The other two age groups also witnessed a rise, from 7% to 18% in 65-69 years and 3% to 55-59 years.
Post reforms, the situation improved dramatically, there was an overall decline in the benefit payouts. The payouts plummeted steeply in 65-69 age group fell from 20% to less than 5%, but in other age groups the decline was not so significant. The fall in the 55-59 group was steady fell by 7%, while in age group the fall was about 10%