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Wednesday, October 30, 2019

Ielts Academic Writing Task 1 Line Graph Below is the graph showing the incidence of mental illness


Below is the graph showing the incidence of mental illness (as indicated by receipt of incapacity Benefit) among older UK males, from 1971-2015. The reform in the benefits system took place in 1995.

Summarize the information by selecting main features and making comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words
Below is the graph showing the incidence of mental illness
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 LINE GRAPH 


The given graph elucidates changes in incidence of incapacity benefits, in three age groups,  between 1971 and 1995 and after introduction of reforms in 1995 up  to 2015.

Quite notably, there was a great reduction of impairment grants after reforms in all age groups. The greatest change was witnessed in age group 65-69, while people aged between 60-64 remained biggest recipients throughout the period.

Prior to reforms in 1995, there was a surge in incapacity grants in age group  60-64 years, from almost 7% to nearly 28% between 1971-1985, while in 55-59 it rose more steadily in this period, from approximately 6% to almost 18% though between 1985 and 1995 it rose more quickly. In contrast, grant of benefits experienced  fluctuations in this period, rising from 3% to 17%.

However, after incorporation of reforms, the where the grants plummeted to almost 1% in 65-69, rising a little thereafter, and declined steadily in 55-59, reaching 12%, fall in 60-64 witnessed fluctuations before touching almost 16%.